Last Monday we had a camp at Ballarat which is the place where it had a gold rush at long time ago in 1850 ∠( ᐛ 」∠)＿Everyone was excited also the people had been there before like me.On the bus teacher told us we will change into the costumes that looks like the people in 1850.
At the start I thought we will just change into costumes and we can do any thing we want but guess what? We still needs to go to the school╭(°A°`)╮! Our school in Ballarat is called Red Hill National School.
But before we go to our school we also went to some other places and when we went to a mine hole we watched a video about the Chinese that came to Australia to find gold that makes me terrified, because the people they never treated other people as well as they treated them selves.
When we finished marking around we went back to our school, our teacher wants to let us call her Ma’am. So thats what we call her for all the time.And we change into our costumes and start to get used to the life in Ballarat.
We can also buy things like raspberry drops they are delicious(●°u°●) .We went there for 3 days we needs to wake up at 6 every day, which makes us feels very tired( for some of us（╯°Д°）When we get back I felt very tired when I got back to my house I had a shower and I head straight to my bedಥ_ಥ. Next time if we have camp I wish we can stay longer and get more money to buy things if we can(´-ω-`). And I learnt alot about 1850 like：how did people treated other people from other people who didn’t got their license and people who got their license. And how they treated the people from other countries like Chinese they had been treated very badly. My favourite part is when we started panning for gold I found a little nugget of gold!（＾∇＾)
Hi Emilia,
You seem to enjoy camp who wouldn’t! I loved the costumes they were warm and snug. I found school fun too. You should edit your writing and reread it a little more though because you it didn’t really make sense to me. I like the little faces you made with the text instead of using emojis but at first I thought it was chinese it’s so smart! You obviously put a lot of thought and time into it. I loved the raspberry drops too I also got a free one for watching a worker make one. It was a great report.
Hi Emilia,
It looks you learned many from the camp and enjoy that, great!
Hi Emilia,
I liked how you wrote about how you felt at times in camp. I also found gold but I only found a small speck of it.
From Sarah
Hi Emilia,
I liked how you had some rhetorical questions in your paragraphs, it made me really interested!
Great job!
From Mia
Hey Emilia,
Ensure you always leave a question for your audience to respond to, and adding photos is a great idea to engage people. What were some challenges you faced at camp?
Mr. B
Great Blog.
It is looking great Emilia.
Keep it up.
Miss Dube
Hey Emilia,
Nice post. My favourite part of the camp was probably the school because we got to dress up and act like we were actually in the 1850s. I also enjoyed the mines.
From Kobe
Dear Emelia,
I like how you explained everything in detail. Maybe next time you could add a picture?
From Esther